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From the outside, Laura’s marriage had always appeared perfect, with both partners grinning and showing respect for one another. However, beneath the calm exterior was a sinister secret that would soon come to light and permanently change Laura’s perception of devotion and love.
It all started ten years ago when Laura almost missed a social function when she met John by coincidence. With a Southern accent that instantly put Laura at ease, he had an alluring charm. She plunged fully into his enchantment, and the two of them became inseparable very quickly.
John appeared to be the ideal partner as their relationship developed; he was kind, caring, and often made Laura laugh. He asserted that he saw in her a lifelong companion who would be loved and admired. Within a year of getting married, everyone who knew them could feel their happiness.
That being said, under extremely common conditions, one evening last week saw the beginning of the unraveling of their marriage. When Laura got home early from work, she discovered John had been on a video call and was not aware of her presence. The words that drifted into her consciousness would rock her world:
“Dude, you struck gold with Laura. She has the money. Man, you’re set for life. There’s no need to break the bank on holidays. Unaware of the seriousness of his remarks, John’s friend Adrian remarked, “Laura’s got it all,” in a lighthearted manner.
John’s response pierced the atmosphere with its icy, acerbic tone: “You think it’s simple staring at her every morning? That is the cost I bear. Laura felt the callousness of his remarks as if they were a physical blow. This was the man she cherished, turning their bond into a business deal where her value was determined solely by her bank balance.
Laura was reeling from the shock, her mind racing. She felt foolish for having trusted in a love that was only a show. She had a great career in finance and lived a luxurious lifestyle, but she had never shown off her money or made it the focal point of their relationship. However, John had presented his acquaintance with a different picture—one in which her steady income served as his safety net.
Laura was determined to tackle the betrayal with more than words, so she came up with a scheme to make John learn respect and value. Instead of confronting him right away, she allowed the hurt of his words to fester while carefully considering every move she would do in retaliation.
Young people make fun of a poor old lady on the bus until the voice of a homeless man interrupts them
There are some stories that captivate your attention… We cordially encourage you to read one more moving story.Mary, an elderly woman, finds it challenging to ascend the bus’s steps due to her weakened physical condition.Just when she was about to give up, she felt a solid hand catch her elbow and hold her up.However, her smile swiftly changed to shame when she turned to thank him.Timothy, a tall, thin man with an untidy appearance and appearance of homelessness, was the owner of the hand.Mary instinctively withdrew her arm and gave a stiff “thank you.”Timothy merely grinned pitifully.Rejection was nothing new to him; it was just part of who he was.
Mary’s occupation of two bus seats made him think of his own mother, who would have been embarrassed to see him in such a manner.Timothy took a seat by himself near the back of the bus.Closing his eyes, Timothy leaned back and considered his daughter Daisy.He kept thinking about how she continued to cling to him even after everything in their lives had crumbled.His wife Valery had been diagnosed with stage four cancer two years prior.Timothy was devastated when Valery passed away despite having spent all of her money on medical care.
Following Valery’s passing, Timothy’s world collapsed.Due to his frequent absences to take care of her, he lost his work, and in order to pay off the obligations, they had to sell their property.He moved into a ramshackle one-bedroom flat in a crumbling building with Daisy.Daisy’s circumstances were deemed inadequate by child welfare workers, who promptly took her away.Timothy’s only comfort now that he was homeless was a bus ticket to see his daughter at her house.
The loud, teasing voice of a teenager startled Timothy out of his reverie.”Driver, have a look at this!The boy pointed at Mary and mumbled, visibly inebriated, “This lady should pay for TWO tickets.”His friend interrupted, making fun of her for occupying two seats.With trembling hands, Mary gripped her handbag while the other passengers turned away, refusing to assist her.Mary was told to get out of her seat by the first teen, who gave her a punch to the chest.Mary calmly remarked, “Young man, there are plenty of other free seats,” despite her trepidation. The second teen, though, was not content.Approaching her with an alcoholic breath, he demanded that Mary vacate her seat.
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